First draft improvements- From feedback

Front cover

This is what my front cover looks like after improvements. The only improvement I have made is to my sell lines to show the main feature image better and to align them all to the left.

Contents page

Here is a screen shot of my contents page while making improvements from my feedback. From my first draft I have re-arranged the page to make it look more professional and easier to read. Instead of the images going down one side of the page I have placed them together above the header, I am then going to add a large image above them to make it standout. I have started to arrange my page numbers so they are in line with the text I am going to add. I have decided to leave The Charts column in the same place so it is clear I took inspiration for this idea from Billboard magazine. I have made these improvements due to my feedback below is an image of what my magazine contents page looks like after the improvements.

Double page spread

Due to my feedback I have decided to change some things about my double page spread. I have made all of the frames around my images thinner this is to make it look less harsh and more presentable. I have also tried to make my title standout more so the readers know where to look. I have also changed the font of the text to make the article easier to read it is also smaller. Below is an image of what my double page spread looks like after improvements.