Positives
- Good layout
- Awareness of centrefold
- Genre is obvious
- Consistency throughout the pages
Negatives
- There isn't enough text
- Too much free space
- Make the magazine more fuller
- Make the masthead bigger
- I will make my pages look more full with less free space by correcting the layout
- From the comments I will also add some more text to try an achieve the correct balance between text and images
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